UNLEASHED

For the moderAte to severe fUckedoff

Look at me.. U cant hear, can u damn well f*****g see?
Im the one been standing right there beside u with a heart youve felt beat
After repeat of deceit,
Kicking proudly using all 10 feet..
Where brokenness is a treat
Making me stand while u take a seat
Where u just weren't satisfied till agony took defeat!
Acting blinded! Not once seeing what waz there for u to keep!
Makin it look like this world has u beat!
Where u f*****g preferred the streets
Leaving me to cry in our sheets
Dreaming of the days we had of feats
You being the lion
Me being the sheep
Should be staying right beside me
Instead you creep!
Your confidence becoming to steep
Head all fillin with heat
With this s**t living on repeat!
Just halfway u had to meet!
Got me wearing heart on both sleeves
Spend all ur time throwing out what i been wanting to recieve
F**k
Where without you is the opposite of how i wished us to be
Where i love u
Where feelings stay unleashed

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

Kimberly, this is so raw and intense, it leaves my gut aching. Your poem so artfully captures and conveys the emotional torment we often suffer in our relationships. You just summarized it in fewer words, and more powerfully that most others. Still, seeing your words in this poem reminds us that hope survives--the poet is still writing. Nice work.