Hush, don't make a sound.
A Poem by
iseekagreaterplace
The hurricane,
The speed of sound,
The down fall,
The Sinking Anchor,
The mountains shake,
The flowers wilt,
The chorus plays,
We Grow Up.
© 2010 iseekagreaterplace
Reviews
Each phrase is a powerful, emotional glimpse of the world around us, and within us as well. Wonderful write!
Posted 14 Years Ago
this sounds religious to me .. i like it.
Very nice flow .. we grow up , meaning we reap what we sow?
Good writing and welcome to the Cafe
Chloe
Posted 14 Years Ago
this sounds religious to me .. i like it.
Very nice flow .. we grow up , meaning we reap what we sow?
Good writing and welcome to the Cafe
Chloe
I understood your first four lines but after that you lost me. It would be cool to know what you mean by the last line, "We Grow up" for I know you are emphasizing that part but I don't see how that relates to the whole considering I don't understand the previous lines: 5,6, and 7.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I understood your first four lines but after that you lost me. It would be cool to know what you mean by the last line, "We Grow up" for I know you are emphasizing that part but I don't see how that relates to the whole considering I don't understand the previous lines: 5,6, and 7.
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