Hush, don't make a sound.

Hush, don't make a sound.

A Poem by iseekagreaterplace

The hurricane,

The speed of sound,

The down fall,

The Sinking Anchor,

The mountains shake,

The flowers wilt,

The chorus plays,

We Grow Up.

© 2010 iseekagreaterplace


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Each phrase is a powerful, emotional glimpse of the world around us, and within us as well. Wonderful write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this sounds religious to me .. i like it.
Very nice flow .. we grow up , meaning we reap what we sow?

Good writing and welcome to the Cafe

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


I understood your first four lines but after that you lost me. It would be cool to know what you mean by the last line, "We Grow up" for I know you are emphasizing that part but I don't see how that relates to the whole considering I don't understand the previous lines: 5,6, and 7.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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