Deep sea

All my worst fears, 

Every nightmare, every fight, every time of pain,

I would have rather endured it all, 

a thousand times over.

The wind knocked out of my stomach,

I lay down try to grasp my breathe between sobs. 

It could not be true,

I meant nothing.

nothing lasts forever,

and i was his nothing.

The walls crumbled,

All the strength he had built in me shattered,

all the pain came right back, 

everything that has happened,

all the things I thought I had put behind me,

he kept them at bay,

The strength of his hugs that could bring a smile to my face.

But it was a lie. 

It all was. 

Best friends.

A hero.

I looked up to him. 

All he did was walk away from me. 

Reviews

[ghostcar]

Really moving. I read it slow. Outstanding descriptive passage. Thanks for not trying to rhyme lines. I think you really have a moment here captured. Of course sunshine does not have an apex of happiness without the rain. You have a typhoon here. It is superior work. Thank you for the storm. It is necessary.

[Emily Paige]

Wow this is full of feeling great job I can relate