Love

the feeling it comes

crashing down

taking me under like a wave.

there's no stopping it,

it is much stronger than i am.

i am weak, 

far too weak to save myself from this feeling.

the feeling makes me feel

on top of the world,

but 

i know when it leaves 

for good 

i'll feel useless

                                                                             worthless

                                                                unwanted

the feeling of love

it's a beautiful 

yet hideous feeling

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I know, all too well, that worthless unwanted feeling. I wont tell you I don't want that feeling again.
Just minus the pain that it causes.

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
I love this part and consider as a quote:
"the feeling of love
it's a beautiful
yet hideous feeling"

[Simon Welsh]

This is EXACTLY how I feel sometimes. You've written this perfectly. 11/10.

[Lani]

It's such an awful feeling, it really is! Thank you. :)

[Simon Welsh]

Love "solves" everything eh? you're welcome x3

[Lani]

Definitely causes more problems! :p

[Simon Welsh]

I know :P ironic.. I'm listening to the song I quoted in that previous comment xD