Ode to Rain

Ode to Rain

A Poem by Elaine

Freely falling

watering the worlds flowers

if only it could fall longer

seconds, minutes, even hours

 

natural music

a gentle tune

pouring down

it ends too soon

 

sweet condensation

blankets the sky

the most lovely pattern

to the naked eye.

© 2010 Elaine


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great imagery..
well-written..
nice poem..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! What a great write! It's actually raining over here right now where I live, so I can totally understand where you're coming from with this. Haha, I loved the imagery that you created, and the way you incorporated all of the different senses into expressing one subject. This brought a smile to my face. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Brilliant imagery. I like the fact that you've tried to keep the poem short. But if you were writing in such rich vein, it wouldn't have hurt to add a few more stanzas! Rain always seems to bring out the best in poets. It is nice to see your take on it. Very well done :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, this is amazing. nice work. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the rain, so I can definitely appreciate this. The second stanza is my favorite. It's really simple but lyrical and has good imagery.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow.
Imagery is so serene.
You pulled of the moistness and calmness of rain
Very well.

Great Job

Ishan.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is wonderful its really great

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Elaine
Elaine

Twin Falls, ID



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