As I die

As I die

A Poem by Elaine

This heart has failed me

I can not hear a thing

confusion all around me

and the sight of peaceful wings

 

I can see a butterfly

in this dismal hour

death is overwhealming me

by which I have no power

 

I am wrestleing with death

slowly my life ends

I have a date; with the reaper

in this land of make-pretend.

 

E.B.

April 15,2010

© 2010 Elaine


Author's Note

Elaine
My favorite poet is emily dickonson and she has a poem called " I heard a fly buzz when I died" and that is what inspired me to write a poem about what it would be like in your last moments

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wow, very strong andemtional. way cool. keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is sad but written so well

Posted 14 Years Ago


lovely, and sad... /hug

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a stunning write, taking us into the darkness... and yet, even in that moment of despair you see a butterfly... an image of new life.. Profoundly written...

Posted 14 Years Ago


great write, yeah depression does suck.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow thats good i write poems too mine are a lil sad too

Posted 14 Years Ago


Depression sucks I hope you are not presently depressed It can eat your soul

Posted 14 Years Ago


One thing it would be cool to know is: what's the problem. Good write. Looking forward to read more.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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