Masterpiece

My lover boy he comes to me

With eyes that burn like ice

That special glow that only exist

When I am by his side

The armor plate that guards his love

Has melted with our fire

And forged a hand around his heart

That labels him as mine

We share a love so strong that we

Are willing to give up

Every dream or wish we ever had

To lift the other up

For your desires are now mine

Your success is my triumph

Like a priceless piece of living art

That's simply signed "By Us"

Fantasy could never compete

With the story our life tells

We exchanged our hearts 

And trusted each other

To forever guard them well

Reviews

[eglantine]

I like the first two stanzas the best. I don't care for the change of POV....I don't think it works in the fourth and then I'm confused as to which it is in for the last one.