In Passion

Loving Him

In passion

I find laughter

Because my soul feels blessed

And my heart complete

 

Sunshine

Awakens in my blood

Bringing joy

To a wintered spirit

 

Delight

A type of magick

Invoked by love

And something beyond words

 

Together

There is a fever

So decadent

I never want to escape it

 

Together

I find a peace

I had not known before

A salvation in your arms

 

In defining us

I see a future

That conquers any fairytale

Makes the days and nights

Blur into a perfect infinity

 

Your hands across my flesh

Unadulterated fire

Sweet passion

Gentle love

A sense of wholeness

And happiness

 

 

So much I want to give you

Share with you

Be with you

If only I could catch the stars

And tie the moon in a bow

Even that gift would not be able to show

How much I love you

 

The days we are apart

I see you in my mind

Feel the softness of your breath against my neck

The warmth of your hand in mine

That soft glittering smile captured in your eyes

And the way you tell me you love me

And I can feel that you mean it

And that it isn’t simply careless use of words

 

I watch you work so hard

To be the man you dream of being

But know that I love you now

And don’t demand that you be any more than who you are

For it is you I love

Not your job

Or your pocketbook

Not what you can do for me

Or give to me

Nothing beyond the magick that I feel when you touch me

That electricity that rips through me when you kiss me

The way my body seems to melt and fit perfectly against yours

The way I can simply sit and laugh with you

And be blissful

And complete

And know that I’m not alone

And that you are there

When even the darkest of my past threatens me

 

I believe in you

Trust

Love

And dare to prove those around us wrong

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Both woman and man need to know they are worthwhile. Your words are kind and powerful. Life can be a pain in the a*s. We need to feel comfort in the arms of someone we can for and need. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[FlawedByDesign]

Truly beautiful. You've expressed your love for him and the way he makes you feel in simple ways, yet you have infused them with so much feeling. It's hard to debate such words :)
I'm glad you chose to go without a structure or rhyme because they really don't do such feeling any justice.

The only thing I wanna bring up is in the last stanza, lines
"And be blissful
And complete
And know that I’m not alone
And that you are there " - In my opinion the repetition of the word "and" at the start of every line, takes away a bit.

Nicely done.

[Antonio Valentino]

This was amazing, what a joy to read.

I watch you work so hard
To be the man you dream of being
But know that I love you now
And don’t demand that you be any more than who you are
For it is you I love
Not your job
Or your pocketbook
Not what you can do for me
Or give to me


That was beautiful.
Antonio xx