The Unseen

"The Unseen"

I know you're here,

I sense you're fear.

They say you're only in my head,

And I know you're really dead.

What is the test,

That won't let you rest?

Is it the one that took your life?

The one that caused grief and strife?

Don't you know that revenge is wrong,

And that you don't belong?

This is my space,

Get out of this place!

Author's Note

I'm not sure if I like this or not. It's kinda cheesey, but it's also kinda cool. Let me know what ya think!!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This was an awesome write that just kind of creeps around, line by line. You create an eerie feeling of being alone yet not alone... that sense of otherness... Great write!

[Alyssa]

I like this actually, i really wonder what its about, but its really good i like the first three lines the best