How Could Bella Be So Stupid?!

Chapter 1: How Could Bella Be So Stupid?!

 I woke up on Edward's bed.

'Shoot' I thought 'I must have fallen asleep last night!'

The poor guy had a terrible night! Bella had changed her mind and went to live with Jacob.  Last night she brought over the divorce papers for Edward to sign.  I spent the night trying to comfort him.  I wonder where he is anyway.

 

I walked down the stairs.  Carlisle was sitting on the couch watching the news.

"Good morning, Carlisle." I said then yawned.

He looked away from the television. "Good morning, Kayla!"

"Where is Edward?" I asked.

"He went hunting with Emmett and Jasper.  Had to let off some steam." He looked back at the TV.

"Yeah, he was really upset last night." I agreed.

Rosalie came into the room, carrying Renesmee.  My heart sagged as I saw the upset look on Renesmee's face.

"She saw the whole thing last night." Rosalie informed me, solemnly. "She knows that Bella is leaving her and Edward."

Renesmee reached her arms out towards me, and I grabbed her.

She put her hands on my face and I watched last night's scene with Bella all over again.  This time from the top of the stairs.

When the vision was over, I realized I was crying.  I hated seeing Edward in so much pain.  The misery was unbearable.  I began hyperventilating.

I heard a door close and Alice appeared next to me, with her arms outstretched.  She took Renesmee from me and put her on the floor.

"I had a vision," she said, "that you were going to faint in 5...4...3...2...1."

And just as Alice said 1, my legs gave out and I collapsed into her arms.  She set me back on my feet.

"Thanks Alice." I breathed.

"No problem." She said and stared into space. "They'll be back in 15 minutes."

 

And sure enough, 15 minutes later Edward, Emmett, and Jasper came through the door.

I walked up to Edward. "How are you?"

"Fine." The pain was visible in his voice.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door and Rosalie hissed.

I answered the door.  It was Bella.  Hatred flooded though my veins.

"You have some nerve showing up here!" I bellowed. "What?!! Have you come to destroy him some more?!"

Edward walked up next to me.

"Bella." Edward greeted her, agony emanating from every part of him.

"Edward." Bella replied with no emotion at all.

"Do whatever you need to do, then get out of here!" I said, angrily.

She reached into her pocket and pulled something out.

"Hold out your hand." She ordered Edward.  He stuck it out, palm up.

Bella reached over and placed the tiny object in his hand.  It was her wedding ring.

The anger roared once again, and I slammed the door in Bella's face.  I stalked off to the kitchen.

'Poor Edward!' I thought. 'How could she do that to him?! How could she be so stupid?!'

I took a cold, wet washcloth and rubbed it on my face.

 

When I came back into the living room, Edward was sitting on the couch looking distraught.  Esme, who must have just gotten home, sat next to him.  She was whispering something that my human ears couldn't hear. 

We were the only three left in the room, so I sat on the couch next to Edward.

"Sorry you had to see that." I apologized about my anger from before.

"It's OK.  It kinda felt good.  I just wish you slammed the door in the dog's face instead! He stole Bella! That's why I never trust wolves!"

I couldn't help but laugh at that.

"Well it seems like you're already starting to make a recovery." I noted.

"No, but I'm trying to.  If Bella wants the mutt, she can have the mutt.

"You really did love her." I stated, and then out-of-the-blue my stomach growled.

"Yes.  Now lets get you something to eat." Edward stood up.

"Okay." I agreed, and then stood up too.

And together, we walked into the kitchen.

 

Author's Note

Edward quote #1: "All right. Forget time limits. If you want me to be the one-then you'll have to meet one condition. Marry me first."

Reviews

[honeyblossom]

Good good good!!! I really like it!!! I hope you keep writing this Kayla! :)

[Lou]

LOL

[Danielle]

This is a very interesting view of the story. Although it is an impossibility, since vampires love one person forever once they feel so strongly about them. But it is fanfiction of course, and in fanfiction, anything's possible. I thought your writing skills were very good, though. I have a fanfiction After Breaking Dawn as well. Rate it?

[melissa]

I love it! :) great job!

[Brooke]

Very good! I like the idea of Bella leaving Edward (no offense to anyone who likes them, I've never been a big Edward/Bella fan) But, no rideness intended, I think I have an idea of what's going to happen. You might want to make it more suspenseful, so really get a good cliffhanger.
Also, you may want to explain how Kayla became a part of the Cullen coven. Maybe you could do something like a flahsback of her life, where she remembers how it came to be.
Good writing, though. I look forward to reading more.

[Avid_Writer30]

I I hope you don't think that I'm trying ot be rude or anything, because I'm not. I just have some advice for you. The plot is great..I like how you made of story of what you think is going ot happen or wants to happen whatever. I'm a huge fan of twilight..and I would hate to see Bella and Edward break up lol..but besides that..in some parts..I do find it's a little corny..just a bit. Like the thing when Kayla faints and Alice says "5.4.3.2.1." and she faints..but yet a minute later she is fine..I find that just a bit odd. The story is good..but it would be nice if you explain who Kayla is..All of a sudden this random human girl just pops up in his life..and it says she feels miserable for him..but if you don't tell why she feels miserable..like the bond between them, then it makes no sense. You are an excellent writer..just had a few suggestions for you. Loved it overall:)

[Papercuts.Hate.You.Too]

WOW...i love it
i would of never thought bella and edward would split
exspecialy AFTER she had renesmee
ill sooooo be waiting for the rest so write some more soon
leylia

[Alyssa]

Wow. Bella leaving Edward let alone her child is very unrealistic, but thats what fan fictions are all about :)
This seems very interesting, I'm curious as to how you became a part of the cullens lives, maybe i'll figure that out in the further chapters how you got into the mix..
I LOVED IT. I'm so excited for whatever awaits, i have some predictions :)