Blue Moon

I wrote this poem in 2007. I don't think it's that good, I just wanted someone else's opinion!!

The moon shimmers brightly over the quiet lake

As I sit and watch the stars twinkle.

I see the face of the man on the moon,

As he smiles and says hello to the blue moon.

 

Reviews

[Alyssa]

I really like this, its so simple and nice. :)