All for You

This is for you, it said. This is all for you. I'm giving this to you.

Was it love? Was this love? Was he feeling all of this correctly?

He hadn't really known why he was expecting something different. He expected to be able to find at least a hint of composure in himself the second time, given he knew what it would feel like and how it would make his heart thump uncontrollably. But she was mesmerizing and he was lost all over again. Lost in the way they touched, the way she blinked her droopy eyelids everytime they parted for air, lost in the way that her hands were holding him, keeping all his pieces together.

I'd be lost without her.

Reviews

[Shoshana]

so beautiful and full of emotion. true love concedes of two people, helplessly in a trance for each other. A lot of realistic feelings here... a lot of people, including me, may relate to this heart-string-tugging, tear-jerking, beloved poem you have created from your heart. Wonderfully written and I enjoyed reading this very much.
-Shoshana

[Jovilious]

Thank you for your kind review, Shoshana