it'dbenicetobewithyougain

it'dbenicetobewithyougain

A Poem by Jovilious
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You're leaving?

"
Please don't go
dont leave me alone
alone like everyone else does
please stay
stay here with me
stay
it was nice to see you
we should do this again?

© 2019 Jovilious


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*I want to stay*
*Ask me to stay*
*I don’t want to leave*
*I don’t want to be alone*
*Please, Ask*
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Yeah, we should.


Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Years Ago

lol it took me a minute to understand what this review meant but i got it :))

nice
interesting!!! OMG I love how you write! You are sooo deep! Unbelieveable. Wow. so beautifully written.


do u mind if i ask if u could write more of that little story that has Lydia point of view??

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 4, 2019
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Jovilious
Jovilious

There is an ocean of silence between us; and I am drowning in it, OR



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