I'll Meet You In The Stars

thought I'd change from "depressing subjects", to something a bit more happy.

If only they could feel half the love we share,
maybe the hints of perfection would appear here and there.

Let us not be hasty, for we have a life to live and love to bare.
We will grasp it together as one as if Cupid himself was there.

My dear, let the wrinkles of your shirt unfold into a never-ending touch.
For tonight is every-lasting, but I can never get enough...
Of your beauty, and of your soul.
In the stars, we'll sleep, as if the world was never growing old.

The warmth of your glowing lips mix with mine.
Through the universe, space, and time, we will love
each other as if galaxies were blind.

They will never look for us, for they know nothing of our existence.
They know nothing of our relationship or even how far the distance.

Floating in space upon the thin molecules of oxygen, we will fly on and on.
Your beauty takes my breath away, and for that it is not needed. For it is love we live on.

Life is the sand in an hourglass. The rough, loose texture flows by smooth glass,
as if missing every little thing that we've asked for.
Time won't stop us hun. Time is simply slipping as we continue to run.
And when we both fall to our graves, I'll meet you upon the sun.

Because our love will last forever. Young and old, we'll hold each other.
Soon, meeting with the stars, but for now seemingly under-cover.

You don't need directions, nor a map. For our hearts know each others paths.

I'll find you. No doubt. Our love shall rule forever, without days to count.

Author's Note

I really did not put much effort into this. I'm going through some writers-block but it will pass. Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Benjamin L. Weekly]

I'm thinking this is more like prose poetry than true poetry. A different style than I like, but a familiar subject matter. I like the concept of love throughout space, taking a journey through the stars (so I've written a few times about it).

My only advice to you would be to take your gifts of imagery and use simpler language to express it. You don't want to water down the impact with a lot of words. Cheers,
- Ben

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was really a nice shift of the plot from your previous writes. Since, it is not about depression or addiction or drugs...but it is more about being happy, living for the moment and breaking free.
I liked it, I liked the idea and the plot.
You have a very great talent of using absolutely brilliant metaphors in your poems...like -
"Life is the sand in an hourglass" - Do not let this talent go in vain and I'm sure you will reach places with it.

[Emily?]

For some writers block, this is amazing! I absolutely love this poem! GREAT WRITE!!!!=)