Ah! That was....outstanding....
It is immensely thoughtful and deep, very intense and definitely touched me till the core.
There is just so much that we all can learn from this piece of writing...It doesn't matter wherever our life will take us or whatsoever it gives us, but what matters most is how we learn from the lesson and from that experience.
The way you have added your personal touch to it made it more intimating and intriguing.
Without any doubt, I have to say that my favorite lines has to be these-
"With the heart now weakened, we look for love the next day.
Only to find another pain without a moment's delay."- That was so true, personal indeed but I was somehow able to relate myself to it...It is very rare when we read something so well!
Very well penned...very very very well penned....Much mature than your chronological age.
can you say genius??? this is ridiculously beautiful, although those two words are very rarely used in conjunction. your writing is very real and raw. i love it.
thanks for writing my dear friend.
Ah! That was....outstanding....
It is immensely thoughtful and deep, very intense and definitely touched me till the core.
There is just so much that we all can learn from this piece of writing...It doesn't matter wherever our life will take us or whatsoever it gives us, but what matters most is how we learn from the lesson and from that experience.
The way you have added your personal touch to it made it more intimating and intriguing.
Without any doubt, I have to say that my favorite lines has to be these-
"With the heart now weakened, we look for love the next day.
Only to find another pain without a moment's delay."- That was so true, personal indeed but I was somehow able to relate myself to it...It is very rare when we read something so well!
Very well penned...very very very well penned....Much mature than your chronological age.
You show a lot of compassion and forgiveness here... we must cherish love, even that we lose for it keeps our heart from losing faith. a beautiful write.
Thanks for reading my work and / or visiting my page. Most of this writing is older. I was in my early teens when I started writing but took some time off about six years ago. Believe it or not, these.. more..