Without You

short one

Times with you. Times with her. Times with my lover.
I conceal pain. So simply expressed through hope or
sadness. I feel far behind my best. Times without you.

Author's Note

ill be honest and say, i didnt have to think about this... i sat down and wrote it. no hesitation. but really, what can i do besides miss the only thing that truly matters?

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

After reading the Author's note, I can really make a good sense of this entire piece.
You know, often our best work comes like this only...when we just write from our heart without thinking about the structure, the flow and things like that, since at that time our heart itself doesn't only write words but also our true emotions.
"I feel far behind my best. Times without you" - This is really a very genuine and personal expression and I truly admire this line...because it is just so real!

Great work and just keep writing!

[!!..Love..!!]

Oh my god, this is so tragic and beautiful!!!
The title reminded me of a poem "Without you" written by a friend of mine, Kevin. But this is also great. Random yet so much in depth.

[Bexers]

It was short and sweet, but definatly to the point.
I did enjoy this. I was almost expecting it to be longer, so the length was indeed a surprise!

[turtlegirlluver]

Its short, but it has so much emotion and feeling behind it. It also deals with a big thing that people face, hiding their pain. Good job!