To Find the True Essence of Love

To Find the True Essence of Love

A Poem by LlamaLord
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Relating to heaven in many approaches. (just for a few of you slow people.. lol jk)

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Wrestled the night for a chance at never-ending happiness.
Pain spread out thoroughly onto the porch of graciousness,
to find the true essence of love.

So consume its many melodies to find a glorious tune.
Essence of the early bird, rises upon the clouds as a sweet perfume,
to find the true essence of love.

Tranquility reaches perfection as our blackened world discovers peace.
Retreat with agony you satanic sin. Start a new as we did and cease
to find the true essence of love.

Waking to find dirty sheets, we continue to dream of a perfect love.
The perfect life. The perfect world. Wait your turn for your place above,
that is the true essence of love.

© 2009 LlamaLord


Author's Note

LlamaLord
Finally ended my writers block :D

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Oh! I never knew that you were going through a writer's block! Its a phase which very often comes in every writer's life. But after reading this poem, I can say that this is really amazing my friend and you have came out of your block in such an awesome way!
I loved this entire piece, but I liked this line the most - "Waking to find dirty sheets, we continue to dream of a perfect love." - Wow! Isn't it ironic!!!
Really, a brilliant piece of writing :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh! I never knew that you were going through a writer's block! Its a phase which very often comes in every writer's life. But after reading this poem, I can say that this is really amazing my friend and you have came out of your block in such an awesome way!
I loved this entire piece, but I liked this line the most - "Waking to find dirty sheets, we continue to dream of a perfect love." - Wow! Isn't it ironic!!!
Really, a brilliant piece of writing :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will say no writers block here... a wonderful piece... searching for the essence of love... all we need to do is look around at the simple things in life to see that love is all around us... God plants it all around nature so it can grow wildly and spread to our souls.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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