Chirstmas Love

Just doing some brainstorming. I'll write another sort of like this later. (needs much work)

Snow falling to gentle stop. Meeting the ground.
Whiteness meeting our lips, we start with sound.
Happiness in your voice and is your touch, I have found.
The fragrance of your skin flows with everything around.
Making the warmth of your heart greater. So profound
is the love you express for such nature. Celebrate now
so that we can sing of joy together.

As if we both forget about this simple pleasure for just a measure
of time. You plant a chapped kiss upon my lips, just for this rhyme.
The frozen flakes falling down upon our frizzed hair as we stand in
your drive way. The entrance to your lair gives me this wondrous
feeling. I feeling the cotton shirt on your back, calmly pressed
against the curves of your side. The presence of one. The Cats'.
We ignore such an interruption, for our emotions are tied. Woven
together to form such an uplifting trap. Falling for love, as I gently
hold your back. Inches from the ground, you wait. Gliding deeper
and deeper into love, we relate.

So take with you our feelings for one another, for at times, we will
need one another. End the story with such a close, while knowing these
lines will never end with a frosty nose. Merry Christmas and a happy new year.
Forever may your relation run, with joyous cheer.

Author's Note

So im creating a book of poetry for my girl as a christmas present. This will be the final poem that ends the book. Ill of course, do some editing to this one, and add some better vocab. In the meantime, best wishes to all your relations. Have a merry Christmas and happy new year!

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh! This is so good, really so full of warmth!

[Wondering Mind]

Merry Christmas to you and yours, my friend and a Happy New Year. This is a beautiful ending to the Christmas present and I pray to an endless love between you two