With You

I extend my arms around your waist, only to find the chilling of empty space.
Where you should be and where you are. Two things that keep me hoping from afar.
Walk into my hold of affection, while holding your love with heartfelt direction.
Guide me towards the position in which you stand, so that I might stand
with you.

I am but a frame to the masterpiece you humbly hold. Your heart is from the cold.
Beating with the true intensity of deliverance. Steaming without mistakes or existance.
Beyond all things, I find your head in the clouds. Fall from the sky, in love with me now.
These single drops of rain dampen my hair. Knowing you're somewhere, and wishing to be
with you.

So I call upon the Lord to save us from singularity. For never, we will stand with disparity.
I will never forget the crisp sounds of your name. Dissolving into my mind, with blame.
I blame you for all the wondrous possibilities, come true. I blame the only one I truly love. You.
These days become shorter. My love for you grows. You will never know, how much I need to be
with you.

Author's Note

bout her :)

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very well penned... I really like how you call upon your strength and faith to be with the one you love... your words are bittersweet as you describe such wonderful words of devoted love and the heartbreak of not being together.

[Jake Martin]

Yay! I like it very much. A simple poem with a big purpose, this piece really is one of the stand-outs.
"So I call upon the Lord to save us from singularity" is probably my favorite line. You keep getting better at this poem writing stuff :D
Lookin forward to more.
Jake