Resulting From Air

hm... comments and crit. welcome :)

You've got your head under the blank sky.
The darkness seeking past your eyes.
Reflecting off each blade of grass,
the stars shine like our sun in glass.
The raw epitome of my love for you,
expressed in words seeming so few.
Stare into the whites of my eyes. So new.
Every time I catch myself gazing into you.
Your arm creeping around my waist to find pure pleasure.
Resolving in heartwarming kisses and love from one another.
Save me from the bitter cold. Take me as your own.
Show me your vanishing smile. Everything I've known.
All the beautiful memories throughout my time,
placed within the maddening essence of tonight.
And love, take with you our harmonic song,
when you go back to heaven my angel,
where you truly belong.
Sit upon the wet weed-covered lawn.
And baby, when you look past those clouds,
know that I can be there in a heart beat. Loud, coming now.
I'll take with me the things I need for being in your presence.
For the perfect soul mate, brings nothing but happiness.
My imperfections kept me from leaving.
You stayed behind with me, not at all grieving.
We live in matrimony together as two.
One combined love, and the beauty of you.
For my rhymes and actions could never compare,
to your sweet loving words, that result from air.
We go on loving more and more in destiny.
But baby, it's more than that. We're making history.
From the world of here to the world of there,
our song will be sang, resulting from air.

Author's Note

Not meh best, but I like it. What reminds me of her, makes me happy :)

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Yeah! I agree, this isn't surely one of those philosophical write but it came straight from your heart and that's why it is so flawless, purely beautiful!

I don't know why, but I just loved these lines a lot -

"We're making history.
From the world of here to the world of there,
our song will be sang, resulting from air." , it reminds me of one of the songs by Plain white T's

Great work :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow such a deeply romantic piece... and the comparison of air to life in relation to love and emotions is spectacular... she must really make you happy seeing writes like this.

[hey]

"we're making history" =

[Weaza]

O.O I really like this one. Alot of descrition. I think its cute! lol srry I really like it!

[Dice Jordan]

wow, this makes me think I've been listening to a Jimmy Eat World song! very good, very vivid and breath-taking. Keep at it :)