Enter The Mind

Enter The Mind

A Poem by LlamaLord
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Some parts from this poem are from The Lord's Prayer

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Come back into my heart.
Don't leave me in different parts.
You did before, and I fear what for.
Why did you do this to me then?
Did I deserve the torturous beatings you gave me?
You wouldn't let me die, mentally or physically.
This time I see you with the welcoming of many.
Of many unbroken hearts, and needing times.
The times I need to recover from unspoken rhymes.
So lead me not into temptation,
but deliver me from evil.
For thine is the power of love and confrontation.
Enter my heart and leave me full.

Hallowed be thy Name
.
Sacred love found, and needed love came.
Now with consideration, love enters the mind.

© 2008 LlamaLord


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"Sacred love found, and needed love came.
Now with consideration, love enters the mind.'

You know Austin, I have always found interest in the fact that at certain times in life, often those unexpected dark moments that creep up on us, all of us (perhaps some to a larger degree than others) ... someone or something comes along to remind us (if we pay attention) that it's all ok. That love does exist, that we are truly our own worst enemy sometimes and that with just a spec .. a tiny little morsel of faith, everything around us can shift from grey skies to blue.

This poem just reminded me. The last two lines drove it home.

Excellent write! Thank you.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Sacred love found, and needed love came.
Now with consideration, love enters the mind.'

You know Austin, I have always found interest in the fact that at certain times in life, often those unexpected dark moments that creep up on us, all of us (perhaps some to a larger degree than others) ... someone or something comes along to remind us (if we pay attention) that it's all ok. That love does exist, that we are truly our own worst enemy sometimes and that with just a spec .. a tiny little morsel of faith, everything around us can shift from grey skies to blue.

This poem just reminded me. The last two lines drove it home.

Excellent write! Thank you.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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