Confusion Compressed In Love

Confusing love. Lovingly confused.
The power of love, wrongfully abused.
Understand the basics of compassion.
Then try to comprehend the bold caption.
The text that needs to be understood.
No one understands, no one could.
The power of love compels the human soul.
Love is needed, pain is simply cold.
Unwanted. Unneeded. Exists to show you it's there.
The mixture of mind and personal affection.
The power of protection and mental deflection.
The feeling of great compassion soon brings emotional extraction.
The end relationship sealed with the essence of truth.
Careful now. One chance to take it in.
Pay attention and be sure to listen.
Spilling my heart. Every bit of love compressed.
Squeezed into the tiny form of communication we call words.
All of my feelings soon expressed into verbs.
Let it flow from your heart and reflect in your eyes.
You try to hide the words like some clever disguise.
Reveal them to me love. Show me the real feeling.
Always here, awaiting your talk of me.
Awaiting the talk of your life.
The blind-spots you can't see. Here's a light.

Reviews

[Cary]

I really, really liked that poem. I loved the way you worded it and the imagery you used to help describe it. There were also a few lines that really stood out to me, like "All of my feelings soon expressed in verbs" and the very last one, "The blind-spots you can't see. Here's a light." Those were just two of my favorite lines, but I really did like the entire thing overall. Nice job. :]

Edit: Oh, I also really, really love the first line. :D It's very cleverly written. Just wanted to throw that comment in here. ;]

[John Galloway]

Thanks for the review, and this fantastic!
You rhymed it so well, while keeping the sense of it regulated. Very good job.
If I were to make a rhyming poem, it would stop making sense after the first or second line and start getting off focus and unorganized.
I admire that you do not do this. :]

[Kristina]

I loved it. How old are you? I hope you don't mind my asking.
Wonderful insight, well written
Keep Penning!!!!