Adulation

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Oh, love, how we meet once again.

I've fell in love at random, I've fell in love with friends.

In this piece, I will use the best of my arts.

Hopefully even pave a way into your heart.

So many reasons why I think I'm in love.

That warm feeling in my heart, especially when I get your hugs.

All those butterflies you've given me in my tummy.

All of those giddy moments we had shared, Haha!  You're so funny!

Just seeing you brings a smile to my face.

I don't say it much, but you brighten up my darkest days.

By now I believe you know every inch of my soul.

It's quite strange despite that, you still love me as a whole.

I love my nicknames for you, dear, darling, my silly cupcake.

In this garden of life, you're definitely no snake.

I love you for you, promise me you'll never change.

So long as I stay with you, I'll never turn deranged.

I'll never forget that day you fell asleep in my arms.

I couldn't believe that you trusted me to keep you from harm.

You're so dear to my heart, I believe that this love is true.

So I guess that the only thing in this Earth that I want is YOU.

I love you . . .

No, scratch that out.

I'm IN love with you (;

Reviews

[demureminds]

Such a sweet poem! I liked the mood of it, although I will say I think you have definitely expanded as a writer. Wonderful write nonetheless!

[Tai Ryens]

Indeed, I have evolved from teenage rants about love to clever pieces of dark poetry . . .

[Swateek]

its rilly a sweet one...great work buddy!! :)

[Siobhan Crosier]

Awww..... its beautiful.... :) I love the ending, "I love you . . . No, scratch that out. I'm IN love with you." Soooo cute!

[TreeSpirit]

awwwwww!!!!!!! What else can I say AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

[Astrid]

Yes, yes I did, Tai x3

[Tai Ryens]

I'm sure that you loved it too, Astrid ;D

[Astrid]

This is beautiful. I'm sure she loves it.

[Thea]

Aw...Totally sweet, Tai...This is actually great...
"Just seeing you brings a smile to my face.
I don't say it much, but you brighten up my darkest days."
I like the rhyme scheme very much! And wish you luck on the contest!
I hope you win! :)))

[paparapapa]

"I'll never forget that day you fell asleep in my arms.
I couldn't believe that you trusted me to keep you from harm."

This one's a really good take on a simple and often times overlooked gesture. This is really sweet. Another great write from you. ;)