For Her

Of all the stars in the sky so high

You're the one that shined the most bright

It's hard to believe that just because I needed someone to open up to

Could lead into the three heartfelt words, I Love You.

To be honest, I never thought we'd get this close

Now, I pray you'll be there when I have no hope

All those times we've talked and texted

You ease my mind when I feel most vexed

Of all the fish in the sea, I want this one

You're both my moon and my sun

Here comes the end of a poem where I spill my heart

You know, the one you have now become apart

This is one of the poems that I wished would never end

But there are still some words that cannot be written with a pen

Author's Note

Wrote this for my first love, it feels so good to love and be loved ;D
Enjoy ^^
Oh, and to clear up some questions, I read this to her personally last week, haha ^^

Reviews

[The Scholar]

Goodness me, this is incredible! My favorite one of your poems by far.
It's so cute.
And the last line is so powerful. Even though there are some words that cannot be written with a pen, never stop writing the ones that can be!

[Kruppz]

"But there are still some words that cannot be written with a pen" oho?
It's a pleasure to read a poem-an expression of pure feelings of friendship & love- with a distinct structure & effortless flow esp. when it comes from a 13 yr old reminding me of those days. I remember how I took to writing poetry for emotional release when your age. My first poem was an apology to a cherished friend.

[Poisoned Hearts]

This is very nice. I feel the same about someone that I talk to a lot. I have written a few poems about her and given them to her.

This is real nice. Love is always an inspiration to write a deep poem.

[TreeSpirit]

way to capture first love!

[Astrid]

Ohai :D

[Sarah]

This is so sweet. lovely peace. nice work...

[emma]

so cute, so sweet. love it:)

[stars are far]

Oh.. this is so sweeet
im sure she loved it and felt special well done boy ...well done
keep that up :D

[Thea]

Aw, this is so sweet...Looks like you're really, really, really inspired! I'm sure if your first love reads this, she will love it! Full of truly passionate words... :)))
"But there are still some words that cannot be written with a pen"
I like the ending...There are really things that words can't describe...
Amazing poem! :)))

[paparapapa]

Ugh. I loved it. Haha. I find it sweet and captivating. She's lucky that you made a poem for her, and a great one at that. Good job. Keep on writing! ;)