For Her

Of all the stars in the sky so high

You're the one that shined the most bright

It's hard to believe that just because I needed someone to open up to

Could lead into the three heartfelt words, I Love You.

To be honest, I never thought we'd get this close

Now, I pray you'll be there when I have no hope

All those times we've talked and texted

You ease my mind when I feel most vexed

Of all the fish in the sea, I want this one

You're both my moon and my sun

Here comes the end of a poem where I spill my heart

You know, the one you have now become apart

This is one of the poems that I wished would never end

But there are still some words that cannot be written with a pen

Author's Note

Wrote this for my first love, it feels so good to love and be loved ;D
Enjoy ^^
Oh, and to clear up some questions, I read this to her personally last week, haha ^^

Reviews

[Blessed_Angel]

Oh i know that feeling so very well thank god i found him he is the best thing in the world to me. Well great write

[alley]

That's very unique love! I very appreciate that their is still love like this. Goregous!

[K-mo]

really nice!

[Maroon Surreal]

B-E-A-utiful! :) Thanks for this wonderful poem!

[hmm]

Such a wonderful delightful read.

[Geoff Hubbard]

really nice bro. if i could make a suggestion id have it read cannot be written in pen. i think it would flow a bit nicer. just a suggestion but a good write

[Leslie Philibert]

Gentle,nice poem about love,good work.

[Ysabel Reyes]

aww what a beautiful poem! did she like it? I really love this. so simple and sweet.

[emmajoy]

What a delightful poem, a true feeling of first love, the one that'll never be forgotten, nor will ever be equalled.

I look forward to reading your future poem, Tai-Ryan .. and again, thank you for sharing this lovely poem and for joining the Christmas collaboration.