Addicted

Addicted

A Poem by Tai Ryens
"

For liquid could not save me from the pool I drowned in . . .

"

Drowning in my bottle is the faint pang of guilt

whispers of faint memories echoing in my eardrums

cursed rain flooding the area within cobble walls built

and thus sprouted an addiction not cured by rum

~

Indeed

I cackled whilst I wallowed in my own sorrow

for others' warnings did not I take heed

choking on enough alcohol to drown in tomorrow

© 2012 Tai Ryens


Author's Note

Tai Ryens
Photo courtesy of rustyfi on Deviant Art.

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Weirdly romantic.Ooh that would be a great Avitar name.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good indeed....

Posted 12 Years Ago


i hope you find other things to write about

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2012
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Tai Ryens
Tai Ryens

Bay Area, CA



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