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She finds her passion in you,
but she won’t admit it.
She knows you have your own ambition,

and she knows it’s wrong to want to wait,
but she keeps a good secret,
her heart’s at stake.

She knows you’ll never notice,
unless she tells what is true,
but she can’t open up,
until you open up too.

Reviews

[gabiaimee]

Wow............This is exactly what I had been trying to put into words recently. It never ceases to amaze me when someone puts into words what I failed to. This piece doesn't even need a title to explain itself. Very genuine, true words. Nicely written indeed.

[Nini]

A nicely written piece about trying to hide ones true feelings until one feels the time is right to open up. Along with being nicely written, you conveyed the frustration of a love unknown.