Everything Unsaid

Everything Unsaid

A Poem by Wingless Fallen Angel
"

You were afraid to say everything I needed to hear. So I said what you didn't.

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Nothing you say
Can make it go away.
How you didn't speak
How you didn't say.
Tears fall down from deep brown eyes
She hates herself
Because she must SPEAK.
All the words you don't want to hear
Because you succumbed
To your fears.

© 2013 Wingless Fallen Angel


Author's Note

Wingless Fallen Angel
Meh. Sounds forced to me. :/

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It does sound somewhat forced; yet that is the point in a way. She desired for him to say so much and his fear kept him from voicing now she is saying what needs to be said. Whether this is a new beginning or an ending fear often stops our progress in life.
I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wingless Fallen Angel

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Its understandable in a way. Not wanting to voice something to avoid the truth even though its hurting the both of you. Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wingless Fallen Angel

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on December 13, 2012
Last Updated on January 10, 2013
Tags: heartbreak

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Wingless Fallen Angel
Wingless Fallen Angel

Lake Ann, MI



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I'm Wingless Fallen Angel, obviously. Call me WFA, Wingless, Fallen, Angel, or any combination of the above! I love to write and read and not do arithmetic. I'm open to talk to you, about whatever. Me.. more..

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