Success

experimenting with poetry lol

The road to success is not straight 

there is a curb called failure 

a loop called Confusion 

speed bumps called friends 

red lights called enemies 

caution lights called family.

You will have flats call jobs,

but if you have a spare called Determination

an engine called Tenacity

insurance called Faith 

and a driver called Jesus

you will make it to a place called success! 

Reviews

[mattavelli]

That's a fun read. Well done!

[Urja Gokani]

wow your experiment worked amazingly written keep it up !!!!!!!!

[Mskendra Renee]

I sure will and thank you :-)