i n c o m p l e t e .

i n c o m p l e t e .

A Poem by Laine
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I short powm/lyric about being incomplete.

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i woke up one day and decided this wasn't good enough for me.
i could always do better,
so i struggle for a better day,
and i know it's a-comin' because i've been praying.
these long conversations with God are the only thing keeping me sane.
for now, i'm incomplete,
been walkin' this town aimlessly for days on end.
they say i'm a certified life ruiner,
and i hate to say it but i'm starting to believe them.
always straving for more, and that ain't gonna change.
a brighter day's ahead of me and it's always on it's way;
i think we're on to something

© 2010 Laine


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keep up the awesome work. I like the positive attitude and the dismissal of what others say. That's an attitude i wish i had. good job :p

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thnk u did real good on it. Keep up the good work. lol

Posted 14 Years Ago



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