my lost love

Goodbye the love i tot i had,
I never tought it would end this way,
Every night has been like a nightmare to me,
I guese your perception about me has changed,
This enigma change i still can't resolve.

Goodbye the woman i ever loved,
The memories of the good old days makes me shed tears,
Just like rain drops from the sky so are the tears in my eyes,

Goodbye my love and my bestfriend,
Hope is not because of love that made you to hate me,
Goodbye no matter how hard i try,
The feelings can't still go away,
Did we gave up too soon for this love?

Goodbye the love of my life,
how do you want me to start over again,
The pains in my heart is killing me slowly,
But i guese i just have to move on,
Maybe you still need me or that you don't,
Nothing left to loose after loosing you,
Leting you go is the hardest decision i have ever made,
Goodbye my love!!!

Author's Note

pls pals help me review this little writeup,and correct me were necessary

Reviews

[E.N.C.Chukwuemeka]

Ilo, maybe from the editor, I think short forms of words should strictly be monitored especially in a formal writings. Congrats for such a wonderful weaving of words!

[YKT]

Huh. So sad. Well written. Good Job

[scofield]

chidi thanks for the correction

[Geo Lawrence]

U welcome bro

[scofield]

just felt like writing this love poem