Moon and sun

 

In the place between the setting sun and rising moon

I lie

With the shadows of the world beneath

 Reaching up

To The essence of burning clouds and frozen stars

Breathing into the skies between

Of the skies- the lady and master,

Loosing and winning freedom, Forever

 To reach, to touch, to kiss, and to love

Gazing up, I loose

Those fears and worries, those hopes and dreams

Touching the tears of sunlight and the warm gaze of moonlight

The lost and broken heart cries in awe.

Bleeding my soul out to reflect in the mirror of the sky

Between the sun and moon I am bound

Longing to escape my place

In those bonds I see such colors to fly.

At sunset, tonight the moon rises.

Author's Note

no real format, just my thoughts. don't forget to watch the moon rise tonight. It should be magnificent as its to closest point to us on its orb; only 31,000 miles (50,000 km) away. i.e. It should apear fairly big Saturday night (Jan. 10)

Reviews

[Guardian]

A very nice peace. It's extremely descriptive and I could perfectly imagine everything you were describing. There's some great language and the piece flowed really well. Nice job!