Poetic Justice

I was picked on a lot, and oneday I decided ... maybe this can be a good thing.

 

I have gone out a

WHOLE PERSON

Waiting to return a

TORTURED SOUL;

Beaten down,

Left on my knees,

HEARTBROKEN

DEFEATED

And always craving more.

So go ahead,

Give me more,

Fill me with ammo

HATE     PAIN     SADNESS

Just feed me more!

I will survive off

The misery

SLAPPED

In my face.

I won’t SMILE,

I’ll hate every minute of it,

Be DISGUSTED with your insensitivity,

But still I DARE YOU,

Give me more!

I’ll take it,

Spit it out and

Turn it into the most

BEAUTIFUL

Thing you ever saw.

Author's Note

I have a style of my own, which I think is especially important for poetry.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

YEAH!!!! I love this piece. It's fierce.
I hope when you spat in out, you spat in right in their faces!

This was an excellent write.
I really liked the part:
"But still I DARE YOU,
Give me more!
I'll take it,
Spit it out and
Turn it into the most
BEAUTIFUL
Thing you ever saw."

[Mysty Rayn]

I'll take it,Spit it out andTurn it into the mostBEAUTIFULThing you ever saw.
I am in love with this line!!!!!