I listen where I stand Part 1

I listen where I stand
In the desert next to him
The elongated noise proves
All but lethargic notions of
Our love.
We embrace as I slowly
Drift from where we once kissed.
I'm bewildered.
I can't seem to understand
As my knees begin to buckle.
I reach to Him for sustance.
I'm lost.
Wondering if I can be found.
But I can.
He holds me.
A grip so enticing.
He doesn't want to let me go.
The scent of a honeycomb
Engulfs my nostrils
As I inhale once,
Then twice.
His touch,
Makes we weep blood
For it's so strong and demanding,
But gentle.
Where?
I'm not to know.
Why?
I haven't the slightest idea.
The noise takes me
Far beyond the nature of mortals.

Author's Note

Your suggestions and opinions would be greatly appreciated.

Reviews

[Veronica]

Thanks guys. :-)

[Haunzwürthe]

"Far beyond the nature of mortals" That is a powerful statement and it takes you to a place outside the reaches of love and passion to where one is complete. This and Part 2 are very well written.

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautiful in a strange sort of way. I wouldn't necessarily say this is a confusing poem, but the threads of emotions weave deep. Gread job! :)