Loving you

Loving you

            is like

                    gasping

                             for a last

  b     r     e     a     t     h

               in

                         harsh,

   icy

              waters.

Still, I try.

Reviews

[::Yv0nne::]

I like this...the way you placed the words makes me feel eactly what you wrote..gasping for a breath that you so desperately need. Just when you think you found it as the word breath is spread apart...you lose it again somewhat like love. Very nice:)