Pretty Stars

They are everywhere...

Pretty stars that fill the sky.

I always see them every night.

I love the way the comets play

in fitful moments; wishes made.

Now a comet flies high and by

and I wish the time good-bye.

Comets make wishes come true

makes me wish the rain were due.

I wish the rain would come tonight

because it makes my sky so light.

The dancing trees make me so glad

that saytr's hear the wish I've made.

I wished for you to come to me.

To be whom I wanted you to be.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

lovely poem!
has an irish ring to it!

[Dream Weaver]

Absolutely lovely, no wait...enchanting!

[ChristopherPoet]

I love the innocence in your verse, it's serene. How you link the two halves of your poem is super. There's no break in it's flow, from watching the comets play, to your "wish rain were due". Also, your phrase; "it makes my sky so light" has a beautiful lilt.

[Tate Morgan]

It is a far nights sky that lights your evenings But look to the moon know I am to .From that celestial sign post many have connected over countless yrs and space the eternal beauty that we own as inhabitants of this small world.Know you this I send you a kiss for the beauty in your soul.And wish for you to know you have shared something precious

[Bear]

I've been observing the night sky since childhood when camping out with family, then friends... just something about the moon and the stars that temper my soul. Many a poem I have penned, some of which were inspired by the heavens above. I enjoy the rythm of your words!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Flow of words made this a fun poem to read a loud. Nothing as beautiful as a clear night when we can see all the stars. Poem is excellent. Thank you.
Coyote

[Arthur Henn]

Another beautiful wordplay of Irish JOY!

Thank You.

Art

[Antonio Valentino]

Very pretty poem Faelyn!

The stars are amazing aren't they, just like this poem.
Very well done!

Antonio

[ICE]

I love the stars. The way they sparkle and shine in hte night sky. This was a lovely poem. Keep up the good work!

[The Analog Kid]

The last line: "I wished for you to come to me.
To be whom I wanted you to be," is beautiful. Also nice imagery. You write with such a nice flow. You can't help but smile after reading your poems:)

Patrick