No Frills

ur looks don’t thrill me

ur habits are foreign

ur words have captured me

we can’t stop talking

Bout u, bout me

Bout nothing in particular

u made me feel things

I thought had died

U say I’m special

I know u lie

But still I’m hooked

Everyday

To log on and see what u have 2 say

Infatuation or stupidity u tell me

Its just weird how we think similarly

PB 9-17-08

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

This kind of caught me off guard, as it speaks well of that surreal online relationship - there are certain things that simply do not matter in the same way they do offline. There is less physical and more everything else, that comes into play. Infatuation is the word that comes to mind, yes - but that is how most things start; it is up to the two people involved to see where they want to take it; and as long as they are honest about it, it will not fall apart because it started a certain way...

...I liked the words No Frills, it made think about the saying - it is what it is. Yep, it is what it is, no frills... that is so awesome.

Thank you for sharing this with us... :)

[J.Black]

wow, this was pretty good. I actually really liked this.

You are a good writer, keep it up