Anticipation

Anticipation

A Poem by Pointblank

Anticipation

 

Butterflies permanently embedded in my core

Unsteady breaths and sweaty palms

Thoughts that overrun my mind

Anticipation

Of your touch

Your kiss

Acceptance in your eyes

I am waiting for the sound of your voice

And dying with

Anticipation

PB 9~17~08

© 2008 Pointblank


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Capture. Possess. Seconds to minutes to hours to days. Dying with anticipation and living with the fulfillment.
But would it not be great to be hung up on the anticipatory edge of loves orgasm?, Talk about dying!

A very easy to read but VERY thought provoking poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Mercy. I think that perhaps no female on Earth has ever had that much emotion for me....maybe my dog. What a beautiful, tender, and delicate presentation of romantic anticipation. Wow. What that must feel like.

Todd

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 17, 2008

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