Simple Words

Simple words nor emotions can express what I want to share with you

awake at midnight under the moon

the warmth of my touch

desserts of vanilla and chocolate

the sun as it comes up

holding you

holding me

your smile

after my kiss

so hard to tell you

the feeling of this 

PB 8/20/08

 

Reviews

[Windy]

Wow, another short but meaningful write, all the while keeping your flow and imagey alive and well. It seems a bit sad, you want to share such wonderful things but find it hard to tell her/him about it. Maybe it's hard to "tell" someone the "feeling" but perhaps showing them instead would solve the dillems? Congrats on another good read and write. ;)

[Michael X]

The first two sentences speak valumes reagrding the intention of the meaning, as well as enchanting
imagery that sets the readers heart adrift, float upon each well placed word that brings the creative

aspect into full spectrum.. in way of awakening the senses, with pastel and beautiful shades of
sentiment, the romantic aspect is really nice, embracing ones thought with the possibility to glimpse

eternity in the eyes of a lover, to see the stars in the smile, the warmth of the morning sun in
the touch, enticing and sensual, the flow takes on a life of its own, excellent work.
Take Care, Mike