Before The Kids Alarm

A Poem by Pointblank

Silence, Be Still

In nothingness, All is well

Sound may awaken

Resistance is futile, It will be

But for right now

Shhhh….Just me

WR 7-18-08

© 2008 Pointblank

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James Takeo Panton

Such an intimate moment that we can all appreciate...loved it!

Posted 16 Years Ago

C.T. Bailey

Hmmmm....makes me want to be late for work. Makes me think about how my son is grown up now and has pretty much got it all figured out. Makes me think about sending him to his grandparents for the weekend. Yep. Your writing makes me think alright. Very nice!
Todd

Posted 16 Years Ago

Cassandra

Sexy in a brief and silent way. Quiet words were used but I feel as though something NOT quiet is gonna go down before those kiddies wake. hopefully for your sake. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on July 18, 2008

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--------------------------------------------------------------------- So much has changed. Even the poems Ive written seem so foreign to me. I've come back to write again and found an emptyness of.. more..