P.J.

P.J.

A Poem by Pointblank
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 P.J.

 

I saw your picture today and started to cry

was that you with the pain in your eyes

the man I knew that held me close

before I knew there were loving arms like those

I've searched and searched

heard you were married with kids

left me behind happy to be rid

I swear I didnt know

That you loved me so

And when I saw you today

My tears just gave way

I will never know if thats really you

or a long lost dream

that will never come true

PB 6/24/08

© 2008 Pointblank


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Not knowing is such a wonderful exercise in torment, and you capture that element very well in this piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


So tell him. Good write though.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2008
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