Slow Death

Lonliness

I throw it up

It feeds

from the inside out

It bleeds

from my eyes

Pain I cannot touch

Until it pours from me

Its unnoticed

day after day

until I bleed out

All the way

PB 6/1/08

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

Funny how people can overlook emotional pain until you find a way to manifest it in some physical manner. You expressed well what many simply cannot get.

[Windy]

I don't know how to review this one. It made me so sad. Though there weren't many words they said so very much. good write

[Edmond Dantes]

short and sweet even though the topic isn't. until i bleed out all the way, wow- what a last line. i have a similar poem that i'll have to post. talk later