Brook

Brook

A Poem by Pointblank

 

Stones shimmer

Beneath the clear water

So beautiful

Smoothness

On the surface rocks

So relaxing

Bare feet

Warm skin

So refreshing

Breath within

 

PB 4/14/07

© 2008 Pointblank


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I found myself sighing, perhaps taking a deep breath, while reading this. I was in a state of sorts, where one might conclude that I was perhaps agitated - gut churning, hands shaking, pulse racing, did I mention gut churning...

I find myself... relaxed now.

Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 4, 2008
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