Somewhere to be

Poem

 

Walking in the rain

Hair stuck to my face

Sorrow stuck to my heart

Pain keeping the pace

Love is before me

I can not catch up

It leads me

It tempts me

It depresses me

I cry

While walking in the rain

Life passes me by

 

PB 5-4-08

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

It has motion. It has emotion. You can feel yourself walking. You can feel yourself crying. If you pause after reading it and close your eyes, you can hear the rain.

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

I like this one. The title is used well; not just a label for the poem but intertwines with the point. And the journey we can relate to.

[Moalix]

This poem is good..its not like many of the poems I have read with this type of tone. Good job. Keep of the good work.