ocean

Swimming in the saltwater room,

Ear to a seashell,

I can hear the ocean

Waves crashing over me.

Author's Note

Okay!
Starting of a new song!
Would absolutley LOVE
Help!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Dawn]

I'm personally a sucker for metaphors and I used to use the ocean or water quite a bit. So far it seems you're on the right track and this could develop into something amazing. Good luck!

[ShadowWolf]

I like this! Reminds me of my last trip to San Diego to visit my son who is stationed there. He was trying to teach the old man how to use a bogie board and, well, I hear the ocean lowered world wide by a whole inch. Must have been all the saltwater I swallowed. :)