I love it when

Not quite what the title seems...

I love it when

You break me down

You pull it out

And rip into me

I want to see

Blood from me

Dripping down your face

I live to cry

I love the pain

You take from deep inside

To shove in my face

I wait for you

To bury your hands

In my wounds again

 

I love it when

You throw me down

Gagged and bound upon the floor

I want to dare you

To make me scream and then

Make me beg for more again

I need the pain

You brand into my skin

Curling so deep within

Me that I can no longer seperate that

From with what I had to begin

I scream for you

I don't want to get away from you

I'm happy bleeding here for you

 

I love it when

You drag me down

Below the ground

Our own little dungeon of hell

No begs, no plea's

No promising me

I'll see the light again

After each and every touch,

I have to scream and yell

I love it so much

I need one more bite

You're happy to oblige

With each and every scar

We fall a little farther

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love it when you (BREAK-THROW-DRAG) me down.

Reviews

[Jason]

Oh man. This was definitely very provacotive and sexy, yet somewhat subliminal. Very dark, but i love it!!

[Dawn]

Good flow and very powerful, you could have easily slipped into the cliche but that's not the case in this piece.

[ShadowWolf]

This reminds me abit of some of Papa Roaches lyrics but perhaps a little more violent. Still very good! This is a powerful piece.

[Dezaraye]

This piece has such power written into each and every line. I'm stunned at the messages in this piece.

[Kelley Pascoe]

Well it seems in the background there is something deepper to this??? Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Symfony of Words]

beautiful, in a sadistic way, i love it

[Ronda]

Wow, this is incredible coming from somone of such a young age. Very well written.