the beast and the witch

A witch
a witch I see.
A beast
a beast that speaks.
Alas the world is not as it seems.
We live unaware of the witch
the witch and the beast.
Who is this beast
this beast that speaks.
Who is this witch
this witch I see.
where dose it come from this beast
this beast that's hunted.
what dose she want this witch
this witch that's burned
A kiss
A kiss from the beast to the witch.
but they are dead
this beast that speaks
and this witch I see.
the witch and the beast

Reviews

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The repetition makes it sound great:]

[Dutch Jr.]

I like the repetiton and parallel structure. Good job.

[The Official Gary B]

I really like this... =)

This is confusing, but I like the repetition. it's different.