passer by

Who am I
I am a boy 13 years of age
my words stand strong
while my body is weak
my love for all shall never be crushed
my mind is the world to me and it shall never be owned.
who am I you ask
I am nothing but a passer by
who am I
I am a boy who stands with friends
who shall never be silenced
I will never be judged by the sins of my father
you can crush my body
but never my will
I am a boy who wheres a mask
who am I
I am nothing but a passer by
a passer by whith a mind
a body and a soul who am I
who am I
I am nothing more then a passer by

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Gimp I read your poem it feels like you suffer a lot of ways .Remember this13 is the hardest yr of life.Not yet a man no longer a boy.If you can get through this time .Life will ease on you .The poem is good .Because it is from the heart about something real .That is the key to writing .People dont all understand that you need not use big words to tell a story.But the truth rings out easilly in you .That is what people want to see.And feel from you
Your Friend Tate

[ShaneBerry]

wow, i like it, this is the second poem in this collection you have and they sound like they could easily become song material!! i love this peice, but like Tate Morgan said, 13 is the "unlucky" age, but it goes by in a year, trust me im 18 and i realize that we are not even halfway through this crazy train called life! :-)
AWESOME POEM! GET A RECORD DEAL!!! then you can make the soundtrack to Element Z lol!!!

[The Dude]

Wow...I agree with Tate Morgan.
But, this poem was very well written and expressed so deeply.