hate love

hate.
It grows for you with my love
anger.
I need to kill you, but your love wont let me.
your words draw tears from my eyes.
never before has man nor woman done this to me.
what are you.
surely you dare not claim human.
I sleep tonight in hopes I may see you in my dreams.
but I awake in hopes I may kill you.
Only you have invoked the fear of death within me.
stirring the angry flame in side of me yet you are never burned.
who are you that can inspire these words which are exposed thrugh my finger tips
who are.
hate and love truly are a force to be recken with but where never ment to be matched. for I speak with experence.
hate is fire.
love water,
never ment to meat

Reviews

[Rain]

nice read
there were a few spelling mistakes...am i wrong...i dont see any other reviewers mention this...>.>
and the line
"hate is fire
love water"

it makes sense, it just depends on the way you read it.
great job on this poem, though just needs a few touch ups and it'll be perfect :D

[ShaneBerry]

wow! this has a nice tone to it!
"hate is fire. love is water,
never meant to meat" that part gave me chills! awesome!!!!!!!

[Anna Kay]

This is very very true sir! :) Keep on!
One quick question: on your second to last line,is it supposed to be love IS water??
Great job! keep on!!
-Anna Kay Patton

[The Dude]

very well expressed.

[Scarlet]

Neat piece.