soul

Behind that faded smile,
there is a broken soul inside
and behind that broken soul,
it is there the problem does lie.
The scars have healed,
they have reopened, to only reseal,
a vicious cycle of pain in many ways
nothing however prevents it from the long stay-
Black stains down faces,
traces of red left in various places,
a lost cry lingers in the black of night-
whispers in the wind of the day-
but it is pushed out of sight
and the soul tossed,thrown out of the way.
This soul, it can not continue on any longer,
all it needs is another-to make it all the more stronger.
 

Reviews

[visions of doom]

aah the search for a soul mate , well i promise you , yours is out there , searching high and low for you . when you find him , your heart is going to yell ''THIS IS THE ONE '' but your head will argue with your heart . the path to true love lies in your ability to overcome your mind and listen to what your heart has to say , it is possible that one day your heart may be broken but its better to have snatched even a moment of true love than never to have experienced it at all . so risk that broken heart , give it all you have and two souls that are meant to be together will one day unite .

[Dominic Rosales]

I love it, one of your best. This is very and deeply emotional, and the way it flows together is amazing. Good job, and keep up your great poems. :)

[QuietPoet]

Such beauty in this write. Great job.

[charleybear]

I really enjoyed reading this, "The scars have healed,
they have reopened, to only reseal," is my favourite line.
You conjure great imagery and to me, this was showing the journey of love.All the ups and downs and heartbreaks you have to go through to find happiness. In a strange way it filled me with some hope.
It flowed nicely and was beautifully written. well done and thank you

[Laura Ex]

this is so beautiful.
i love the end how it says it needs another to make it stronger.
so completely perfect. :]